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Be my twisted little star
The monster in my dream it's not so hard
Through the looking glass you wiggled in
Dancing, chasing, breathing again
Sifting through the haunted waste
Your fragile heart your fiery eyes
On your knees your parched throat cries
Sifting through back long ago kisses slick forget to float
Candy roses in a bright white room,
Where am I, am I who or whom?
Nibble the plant water up to my toes,
Creeping and crawling, vines?
No one knows.
Push and shove it's up to my thighs.
The water is killing me, sitting in a parked car,
The toxic wonderland behind my eyes.
The monster in my dream it's not so hard
Through the looking glass you wiggled in
Dancing, chasing, breathing again
Sifting through the haunted waste
Your fragile heart your fiery eyes
On your knees your parched throat cries
Sifting through back long ago kisses slick forget to float
Candy roses in a bright white room,
Where am I, am I who or whom?
Nibble the plant water up to my toes,
Creeping and crawling, vines?
No one knows.
Push and shove it's up to my thighs.
The water is killing me, sitting in a parked car,
The toxic wonderland behind my eyes.
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My entry for the poetry category of 
's contest!! ooh this gave me chills, when i started we were given this list of words to use (10) i couldn't resist weaving them all into a sweet cacophony.... 
Enjoy!
To start this I NEEDED my inspiration, I knew it was somewhere deep down I had to find it!! I found the long lost music video [link]
It's spookily delightful
watch it before you read the poem....
's contest!! ooh this gave me chills, when i started we were given this list of words to use (10) i couldn't resist weaving them all into a sweet cacophony.... Enjoy!To start this I NEEDED my inspiration, I knew it was somewhere deep down I had to find it!! I found the long lost music video [link]
It's spookily delightful
watch it before you read the poem.... © 2012 - 2024 TinyFurrTails
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactVision:This has a very vague, disgusting, almost toxic feeling to it. And I love it! Everything flows nicely and the subject is amazing. How you come up with this stuff, I'll never know!
Originality: Um, I don't think I've ever come across another poem like this, in subject, style, and impact. Enough said.
Technique: You always have wonderful poems and this one feels woozy, like Alice in Wonderland, which the title brought me to. The subtle rhymes are great and the italics bring great emphasize to key words.
Impact: Overall this is another great piece, and I can't find many down points for lack of better word!
Hope you win the contest and this was another amazing poem to read, truly.