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Little Miss Choco Chip by TinyFurrTails Little Miss Choco Chip by TinyFurrTails
My beloved baby girl Talli :) I absolutely love her to pieces, now onto her outfit! I bought the most AMAZING adoptable from :iconlemochacrumbles: ^.^ it's from her icecream set. I've decided to dress Talli up as her favorite deserts from now on :D surprisingly I kept the hairstyle it's kinda cute and it suited her pigtails are good every now and then ^.^ so voila! what a lovely adopt <3

Tiny Edit: her ears, and her tail are supposed to be that big and high up <3 Talli has a squirrelish tail that curls up from her tailbone up her spine like well a squirrel! :D and the big ears are like a fennec ^.^

BTW what do you guys think?! Please please critique this!!

Talli (c) ME!
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:iconpurrincessbunbun:
Very Adorable! you did really well on it ^^
though this IS a critique, I will point out the good stuff and bad stuff.
Good:
I love the close, the texture of the hair, and the eyes ^^

Bad: you might want to lower the tail, or put it in a different position, the tail is an extension of the spine, which it looks like the tail is on her back, not on the tailbone
the blush looks a little dark though, (this computer is hard to see actual colors, as in when I see dark brown or even dark gray, it looks black, since it's around 3 feet long)
and you might want to work on the hip anatomy, it looks like she has a HUGE but this way, when you make the upper legs that shape e3e

overall I think you did a wonderful job ^^ very cute I love your style :)
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3 out of 4 deviants thought this was fair.

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Your skill has obviously improved, which is what I love most about this specific piece.
Furries have not been in my interest, although I have watched you progress from traditional sketches to full on digital art, which is what I see now, which is an improvement I wish I had.

I am here to critique your art, however, so I can explain my ratings. For originality, I gave you a lower rating, only because most of your furries look more or less alike. Go for some change, sometimes~ It'll make everything more interesting, I promise.

As for impact, this piece isn't something I would consider that could impact you, mostly because there isn't much of a concept. However, most chibis are this way, so I hadn't focused on it as much.

I had already talked about technique, so as for vision, the highlights in the hair from the light was a nice touch, although I will say, instead of adding it to every section of hair, maybe you can pick a specific spot. For example I don't think the "pigtails" (?) needed the highlight, although I could be wrong. The blending on this piece is also very well done, as for the shadows and shading. It really does complete the piece.

Overall, this was a very cute outtake on your OC, and I enjoyed reviewing it~ ^-^
Hope I was of help~!!
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TechSupportGirls Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
oh gosh, this is soooooooo cute~ i love the colors ;u; you did such a great job :D
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TinyFurrTails Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks! :D gotta love adoptables eh? yay for new clothes ^.^
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TechSupportGirls Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
so much!! :meow: you did a really great job with the shading as well~
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TinyFurrTails Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
really!? I thought it was less than my best....normally I have more time!
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TechSupportGirls Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
nuuuu it's so good~ you're much too modest~
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TinyFurrTails Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I have the fluish something so my brains probably wooh u.u bit thanks! I prob won't remember u said that later @.@ my poor head
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TechSupportGirls Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
AWW I HOPE YOU FEEL BETTER!!! O0O
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TinyFurrTails Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks ^.^
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VividFlow Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The colors my dear! the colors are really well done! :D
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:icontinyfurrtails:
TinyFurrTails Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol the colors are always the SAME!
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VividFlow Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
but the dress, the colors on the dress xD
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WildFireKain Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
so cute I love it
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:icontinyfurrtails:
TinyFurrTails Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
what makes it the cutest? what's my best detail? i'll remember to include it more often!
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WildFireKain Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Every thing ^_^
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XxSilverWebAdoptsxX Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
She is super adorable and she has a great design!
Also, I love how you showed each step to the texture she ended up with! Brilliant!
I think everything about her is perfect and your skills have improved!
It is a chibi, so it isn't supposed to be perfect or very detailed so great job!:)
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TinyFurrTails Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol thanks for understanding the law of chibi! <3 and thanks for the comment ^.^ this feedback really really helps!
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XxSilverWebAdoptsxX Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
:) No problem!:) I'm glad it helps you!
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TinyFurrTails Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks!
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XxSilverWebAdoptsxX Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
np!:)
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SillyEwe Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Student General Artist
Very cute, but I think you should work on line technique.

Lines inside the character should be thinner than the lines outside of the character. Some lines should be pointed at the end, too. Weight and pressure help add value.
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TinyFurrTails Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
nah, it's my style. I like it, and uh wah? My art is never pointy....I have the round little cute bubbly style. :) and I draw with my finger so yeah.....weight and pressure?
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SillyEwe Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Student General Artist
Drawing with a finger? Never heard of that. *lives under a rock with this new technology stuff*

Weight is how thick the line is and pressure is how pointy the line gets at the end.
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TinyFurrTails Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh! yeah i use my tablet but instead of a stylus i use my finger ^.^ it's easier, hehe. i just like my lines thick and chunky, like a coloring book!
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SillyEwe Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Student General Artist
I could never do that in a million years. Gotta use a stylus. ^^;
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:icontinyfurrtails:
TinyFurrTails Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i do OWN a stylus though! it's just, idk, sometimes i feel disconeccted :)
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SillyEwe Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Student General Artist
It's ok.
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ohhhey Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
omg she's super adoreable ; u ;
Her new outfit is asdfghjjkljhgvn cute
makes me want ice cream.
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TinyFurrTails Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
omg yesss!! isn't she lovely?! :D choco chip cookie dough icecream is my absolute favorite i had to buy the outfit!! i want more dessert clothes D:
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cdot284 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very adroable job
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TinyFurrTails Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks <3 critique if u can hehe!
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cdot284 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your welcome , when i get the chance to i will
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TinyFurrTails Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
^.^
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lucinaALOURE Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
ahh i love her hat and dress :3
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:icontinyfurrtails:
TinyFurrTails Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
they are super adorable :) gotta love adopting clothes!!
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