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Little Miss Choco Chip by TinyFurrTails Little Miss Choco Chip by TinyFurrTails
My beloved baby girl Talli :) I absolutely love her to pieces, now onto her outfit! I bought the most AMAZING adoptable from :iconlemochacrumbles: ^.^ it's from her icecream set. I've decided to dress Talli up as her favorite deserts from now on :D surprisingly I kept the hairstyle it's kinda cute and it suited her pigtails are good every now and then ^.^ so voila! what a lovely adopt <3

Tiny Edit: her ears, and her tail are supposed to be that big and high up <3 Talli has a squirrelish tail that curls up from her tailbone up her spine like well a squirrel! :D and the big ears are like a fennec ^.^

BTW what do you guys think?! Please please critique this!!

Talli (c) ME!
Outfit/hairstyle/accessories etc designed by *LeMochaCrumbles



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:icontlartist:
Very Adorable! you did really well on it ^^
though this IS a critique, I will point out the good stuff and bad stuff.
Good:
I love the close, the texture of the hair, and the eyes ^^

Bad: you might want to lower the tail, or put it in a different position, the tail is an extension of the spine, which it looks like the tail is on her back, not on the tailbone
the blush looks a little dark though, (this computer is hard to see actual colors, as in when I see dark brown or even dark gray, it looks black, since it's around 3 feet long)
and you might want to work on the hip anatomy, it looks like she has a HUGE but this way, when you make the upper legs that shape e3e

overall I think you did a wonderful job ^^ very cute I love your style :)
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Your skill has obviously improved, which is what I love most about this specific piece.
Furries have not been in my interest, although I have watched you progress from traditional sketches to full on digital art, which is what I see now, which is an improvement I wish I had.

I am here to critique your art, however, so I can explain my ratings. For originality, I gave you a lower rating, only because most of your furries look more or less alike. Go for some change, sometimes~ It'll make everything more interesting, I promise.

As for impact, this piece isn't something I would consider that could impact you, mostly because there isn't much of a concept. However, most chibis are this way, so I hadn't focused on it as much.

I had already talked about technique, so as for vision, the highlights in the hair from the light was a nice touch, although I will say, instead of adding it to every section of hair, maybe you can pick a specific spot. For example I don't think the "pigtails" (?) needed the highlight, although I could be wrong. The blending on this piece is also very well done, as for the shadows and shading. It really does complete the piece.

Overall, this was a very cute outtake on your OC, and I enjoyed reviewing it~ ^-^
Hope I was of help~!!
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TechSupportGirls Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
oh gosh, this is soooooooo cute~ i love the colors ;u; you did such a great job :D
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TinyFurrTails Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks! :D gotta love adoptables eh? yay for new clothes ^.^
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TechSupportGirls Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
so much!! :meow: you did a really great job with the shading as well~
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TinyFurrTails Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
really!? I thought it was less than my best....normally I have more time!
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TechSupportGirls Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
nuuuu it's so good~ you're much too modest~
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TinyFurrTails Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I have the fluish something so my brains probably wooh u.u bit thanks! I prob won't remember u said that later @.@ my poor head
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TechSupportGirls Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
AWW I HOPE YOU FEEL BETTER!!! O0O
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TinyFurrTails Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks ^.^
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VividFlow Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The colors my dear! the colors are really well done! :D
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TinyFurrTails Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol the colors are always the SAME!
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